Black Ghost

There really isn't enough for us to judge whether or not it was good or bad. Seriously, this is too short. I wanted to give a crit, but there really ...

Now I'm winning! XD

I don't really get any initial image from it, but it sounds interesting at least, like some kind of dramatic novel. A Winter Memory

AWESOME. XD

Hey Dynamo! I'll start with a few specific points, and then I'll give you my general comments on plot and whatnot. :P Kai had made it to the bottom of ...

Thanks for that, Nate. I'd die if someone spoiled it for me. :( MM

The part about Pat Buchanan was the best. :lol: MM

Alright, here's the rewrite for the prologue. I'll leave the original one up for comparisons. :P And I actually had to force myself to write this, which meant it came ...

I've seen a couple of the CCF critiques, and they're really good. Now I'm thinking this business will actually work. :D MM

Smiling at the comparison, Clevenger watched his reflection in the glass, “Can anyone tell me what they would do in a situation like this?” Just a nitpick, really, but I ...

My brother is on here, but he just joined on a whim and hasn't really come back since. XD MM

O.o I found a beautiful live version of her song Good Enough: I think this proves she can sing ;)

Sorry, sometimes I'm not too clear. Adam had never been a good liar, All I meant is that this bit is enough to tell us that he's lying. You don't ...

I turned to face my best friend, Adam Smith. He had been my best friend for quite a while, and I truly couldn’t think of anything that I did to ...

This was really good, Claudette :P . I could really feel the emotion in it, so you did a fantastic job of portraying a panic attack. I only found one ...